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I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Friday, June 5, 2020
100 word count
Hi every one, Yesterday I did my 100 word count I had to write a story I had to write (that's when I knew I should run) in it.It was pretty easy to write it I had fun writing my 100 word count story. This is my 100 word count story.
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Hello James, My name is Dwane. your really good at writing a 100 word count story. I love how you made lots of really good detail to your writing. did anyone help you?
ReplyDeleteHello Mr James, I'm Ahyan. I like the way that you actually added a starting unlike others where its just 5 words. This is a great and I really like your spelling and how you put it in. Next time you could tell us how you inserted that. Did you copy the text or screenshot it? Anyway have a great day.
ReplyDeleteWAHOO..well done to Guy for persevering.I'm glad he got first.
ReplyDeleteDo you like running James?.I would rather ride my bike than run.
Hello Dwane. Nobody helped with my writing it was very fun writing it and i put so much detail cause i really like writing.
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