I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Friday, February 28, 2020
My wonderful writing
Hello, Every week we do 100 word count. In a 100 word count we can use only hundred words and you have to use the prompt you are given that's on top of your writing. Here is my 100 word count.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello James.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used some great describing words.I saw a giraffe down my street and I have seen a pink hippopotamus down by the school.I have also seen a grey rhinoceros and a brown monkey.
I din't go on safari though.How do you think I saw all these animals in Christchurch without going to Orana Park?.